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IELTS TASK 1: Japan pupulation : past, present and future trends



pertiwi02 11 / 8  
Jan 7, 2016   #1
The bar chart shows Japanese residents measured in million, while a breakdown of the proportion of people age 65 and more between 1950 and 2025, a 105-year period is presented in the table.

Overall, there has been an upward trend in Japan's demography and population aged more than 65 years old. However, inhabitant in Japan is predicted slum up over the future 40 years.

According to the chart, the total of inhabitants in Japan increased considerably from 84.1 to 127.8 million between 1950 and 2005. It was the highest number of Japanese people and then declined sharply to 125.4 million in 2005. However, it will drop significantly to 89.9 million in 2055.

In contrast, there was a gradual rise in the number of Japan's demography. The proportion of total population of resident aged over-65s stood at a very small number (4.9%) in 1950. It will rise to around two fifths (41.0%), the largest number of residents aged more than 65 years old.


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vangiespen - / 4077  
Jan 7, 2016   #2
The bar chart shows Japanese residents measured in millionS, while a breakdown of the proportion of people age 65 and more OVER between THE YEARS 1950 and 2025, COVERING a 105-year period is presented in the table.Overall, there has been an upward trend in Japan's demography and population aged more than 65 years old. However, inhabitantS in OF Japan is ARE predicted slum TO INCREASE up over the future NEXT 40 years.

According to the chart, the total of inhabitants in OF Japan increased considerably from 84.1 to 127.8 million between 1950 and 2005. It was the highest number of Japanese people and then BEFORE THE POPULATION declined sharply to 125.4 million in 2005. However, it wil IS EXPECTED TO drop significantly to 89.9 million in 2055.

In contrast, there was a gradual rise in the number of Japan's demography. The proportion of THE total population of resident aged over-65s stood at a very small number (4.9%) in 1950. It will rise to around two fifths (41.0%), the largest number of residents aged more than 65 years old. ( WHAT YEAR IS THIS RISE EXPECTED? MENTION THE YEAR AS PART OF YOUR REPORT).
naura88 6 / 3  
Jan 8, 2016   #3
The bar chart shows THE NUMBER OF Japanese residents measured ...

However, inhabitant in OF Japan is predicted slum up over the future FOLLOWING 40 years.

... number of Japanese people, AFTERWARDS, andthen THIS FIGURE declined sharply to ...

The proportion of total population of resident aged over-65s stood at ... NEXT, It will rise to around two fifths ...


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