Large shopping center in your neighborhood; 'it can increase province income'

It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Today, there are many developments we can see in a big city and it is understandable that these changes have affected the city system and society in my town. Is this a good plan or a bad plan?

In the past, people in my neighborhood must go far away if they want to shop or buy something that they cannot get in their town. However, construction has changed this, and now people might not to go to distant. These buildings can increase province income and attractive to tourist.

Unfortunately, the speed of development has interesting to investor. This is because investor only want to invest their money that make they will get many advantages. For example, in my town have many development because numerous investor are invest their money.

However, city system change is not necessarily a bad adjustment. Capital city may be move because development that more and more grown. It does not matter too much to find capital city. Nonetheless, society must follow the changes because it is make their live becomes easy.

In short, I think development can increase many things in one district and we can enjoy the change also we get many advantages from it.

>> I think >> ... it makes...

hallo ernhy.

you should use has, because the subject singular.

thx

You should put information about the purpose of your essay in order to make us easy in determining what structure you should use.

I think that you should remember S+has/have+V3
:)

Question:


Here is my intro:
The construction of malls has intrigued people everywhere. Although I accept that malls creates one-stop-shopping culture, I totally oppose with the idea that the project of a new mall should be well underway in my neighborhood.

Some ideas:
Oppose:
more traffic
Parking spaces
Frequently going to mall = a problem behaviour, compulsive shopping

Support:
Job offers
More stores, more products.
Good cardio exercise by walking around the shops

Well, you conclude this intro with a question to the reader. However, your prompt expects you to answer the same question. Therefore, it is better that you concluded the intro with an answer to that question. Tell you opinion in a clear statement :)

In the past, people in my neighborhood musthad to go far away if they wanted to shop or buy something that they cannot get in their town.