Learn foreign language In own country or Country where is is spoken Opinion

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There are many advantages to learn foreign language in our own country.
In first place it quite lot cheaper that to travel to a foreign country where the language is spoken.
It would include the cost of airfare , food , accommodation and school and the cost would become really very high.
In addition there is less stress involved when you learn in your own environment .
Also the compulsion to speak in the foreign language all the time can be stressful.
Where as teacher in your own country can help your to learn in better way as she would explain you the details in your native language .

As teacher would know your native language and she must have gone though same stages of learning so they can understand what you are undergoing .

Your teacher can also give you some memory trick to remember some words.
They can help you to resolve your problems and learn language faster by explaining in your native language.

Nevertheless and argument can be made on learning language in country in which it is spoken.
Only there you can hear the true accent and the idioms of natural speech.
Being surrounded by the foreign people most of the time you will get use to the new environment and blend with the language very well.

Its also an advantage to learn the language in context to the culture that will help to understand the situation and appreciate use of language accordingly.

For example when to go to restaurant and place an order you are surrounded by all native speaker and you will get to know
how do people talk here.How to behave and how to place order.
Also staying in other country often offers new opportunities.
You will also get introduced to some of the native speakers and make friendship with them will visit their home and possibility they can offer you a job or you can study further in that country.

In my opinion it good idea to learn the language in own country till the intermediate level and the go to the country where it is spoken to achive the advanced level .

By doing this you will enjoy the advantage of both options.

It would include the cost of airfare , food , accommodation and school and the cost would become really very high. This sentence is unnecessary

This sentence was to show that cost of education could become very high

In addition, there is less stress involved when you learn in your own environment .

Also the compulsion to speak in the foreign language all the time can be stressful. I don't understand this sentence
As people around you are speaking in foreign language due to which you are not left whith any option and you need to speak in the same language which can become stressfull over time.

As teacher would know your native language and she must have gone though same stages of learning so they can understand what you are undergoing . This is confusing

The native teacher who is teaching you foreign language herself has gone through same learning phase and hence she can understand what difficulties you will face while you learn this language.

LEt me know if you can understand the meaning now ..
Actually while typing i am making these gramatical error .looks like I need to practice typing more essays .