Ielts writing about main fuels in the production in UK from 1981 to 2000

Ielts writing about main fuels in the production in UK from 1981 to 2000

The line graph presents the production levels of various fuels in the United Kingdom from 1981 to 2000. Most fuels experienced an upward trend, except for coal. Notably, petroleum exhibited significant fluctuations throughout the period.

In 1981, natural gas had the lowest production level, with approximately 40 energy units. Over the years, natural gas fluctuated slightly and reached a peak of over 100 energy units in 2000. In contrast, coal production rapidly declined from the initial units in 1981 to under 40 units in 1984. Subsequently, it fluctuated for 16 years before hitting a low of around 35 units in 2000.

Furthermore, in 1981, petroleum held the highest production level at nearly 100 units. It experienced fluctuations, reaching a low of 100 units in 1990, but then rebounded in the subsequent years. Its peak was recorded in 1999 at over 140 units before declining to 140 units in 2000.

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There is a 150 minimum word count for the task 1 essay. The total for this presentation is only 149 words. Excpect a minute deduction for the missing single word. Always meet the minimum word count to avoid even the smallest task accuracy pre score penalties in relation to the word count.

In terms of the summary overview, the enumerated list of fuel types was not mentioned in the summary, and was incomplete in the trending statement. The complete list must be mentioned at the start to meet the information summary requirements. You cannot mention only one or 2 of these. You must mention all of these so it is best to list it as a part of the summary so that the trend can use the high and low descriptions instead.

you should add more comparative of each subject to make your response more longer. try to enhance vocabularies field and pay attention on more of structure of your sentences.