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1984 / Modern Day surveillane proposal, but im an art student



liamg87 1 / -  
Jan 11, 2009   #1
Hi everyone, I have my proposal hand in tomorrow afternoon of which im discussing similiarities between 1984 and modern day survillane. Im a graphic design student and im truly awful at writing essays and with this being my dissertation felt I should get some more rounded feedback that from my peers; from what my lecturer has told me im writing in a journalisitc style, and im clueless as to whether this is good or a bad thing; If anyone could take a brief look id greatly appreciate it, thanks :)

Ive posted the essay on my wordpress as im not sure if were allowed to post the entire essay here as im new, its 1,200 words too; thanks anybody who can help, i really appreciate it :).

sorry im not sure i can link to my site so ill paste it here..

For my essay proposal I plan on discussing the relationships between 1984 and modern day surveillance.
George Orwell's dystopian classic 1984, was written in 1948 and was fantasized as a conceivable future where totalitarianism encompasses all. In 1984, the world is made up of 3 super-states; Oceania (Which includes the UK), Eurasia and Eastasia, all of which share equal power. All 3 super states are totalitarian led, controlled by Big Brother. Big Brother observes and amends its citizen's behaviour, even distorting their thoughts. The story follows the downfall of individuality through constant surveillance. Winston Smith is the main character of the story and resides in London (or known in the book as airstrip 1) which is part of the super state Oceania. Winston Smith, the protagonist is perceived as a frail, middle aged, mal nourished character.

Oceania, the state discussed in 1984, is governed by "The Party"; The Party have taken authoritarianism to new depths; each and every citizen of Oceania is subjugate to round the clock observation and having their minds controlled and warped to ensure loyalty and adherence to the "cabalistic" law structure in place. Atop of the structure is the ever present Big Brother.

Winston, as being depicted in the story as being a frail, middle aged, mal nourished character; has hatred for his tyrannized life and furtively wishes to join the mythical Brotherhood, a suppositional gang of citizens bound on overthrowing big brother and the government.

Nineteen eighty four follows Winston throughout the book where his occupation at MINITRUTH (the ministry of truth) is to alter the past incidentally by re-writing old newspaper articles to coincide with new stories/truths as conjured up by the Party, Thus a means of controlling and altering thought of the population.

"He who controls the past, controls the future" is the slogan adopted by The Party, It entrusts Winston with his occupation, yet he is blind to understand and adopt the slogan as a lifestyle. Further on in the book Winston gathers confidence in his own thoughts and is single mindedly determined to broadcast the government Party for all that it is. As the story goes on he is later coupled with Julia. Julia is perceived to be a radiant, youthful female, a physical contradiction of protagonist Winston, yet just as disgusted by the authoritarianism afflicted on by The Party.

There are many points to take away and discuss from 1984 which are ever apparent in today's modern society. It's possible to see the usage of "doublethink and the constant shift in war (reasons?)" used today in each party's talking points. A key example of this in modern society is the invasion of Iraq, firstly it was made apparent we needed war to disarm Iraq from weapons of mass destruction (Which we then found they had none); the party, in this case labour then stated we needed to "Plant Democracy" before bringing our troops home and then finally we were led to believe Saddam was a man of evil and needed to be rid off. All of these issues are apparent in 1984; Saddam represents Emanuel Goldstein too which all of our hate is directed, the reasoning and ever shifting ideologies behind the war in Iraq are those similar to that of the shift between allies and enemies in Eastasia and Eurasia and the fact the vast majority of the general public put their beliefs into the party to sort out the situation in the middle east.

Despite the disregard of individual freedom and lacklustre quality of life, a key point noted from the book was how the party/government succeeded in staying head of state. The party managed to do this using total control. If for example a party enforced complete power over its citizens similar to that of the party in Oceania did, it's not possible to see the party collapsing on its own. North Korea is a prime example in which we can liken this situation too. A piece in which I came across online is that of Nicolas Kristof's article which commentates about the propaganda radio broadcasts which start early in the morning, he also talks about images of Kim Jong Il and Kim Il Song which occupy a wall in every house.

Another relevant point taken from 1984 is how the children are brought up as civil spies for the party, "it was my little daughter, she listened at the keyhole. Heard what I was saying, and nipped off to the patrols the very next dat. Pretty smart for a nipper of Seven, eh? I don't bear her any grudge for it" quotes Parsons in regards to being questioned why he had been captured by the Thought Police, the reason being his daughter heard him quoting "down with big brother" in his sleep (pg 245). This relates to the advertisement campaigns which are being implemented at this very moment by the Labour Party in which they ask any persons too report suspicious behaviour which may denounce somebody as a terrorist, this situation may have played a role in the killing of innocent man, Jean Charles de Menezes. Example

Another startling oxymoron which we can relate 1984 to modern day society is the fact government legislation tells us that we must give up some of our own individual freedom and earnings to the state. The point up for discussion is we must enhance our authoritarian state, raise taxes, raise oil prices, and the most relevant of all, keep the Eurasians and Eastasian refugees out; in our case illegal immigrants, Freedom is Slavery.

In 1984, MINILUV (The Ministry of Love) enforces the citizens of Oceania to show loyalty and love towards Big Brother, they enforce this upon its citizens through fear, torture, and rehabilitation or brainwashing. The MINILUV has no windows and is protected by barbed wire entwining and guards of the party armed with "jointed truncheons". Internally, the bright lights are never turned off. In 1984 its significance is played down by the Party, but its function, unbeknown to the citizens of Oceania; make it the main ministry in the super state, by controlling the will of the population.

"There were no windows in it at all. Winston had never been inside the Ministry of Love, nor within half a kilometre of it. It was a place impossible to enter except on official business, and then only by penetrating through a maze of barbed-wire entanglements, steel doors, and hidden machine-gun nests. Even the streets leading up to its outer barriers were roamed by gorilla-faced guards in black uniforms, armed with jointed truncheons."

This characterization of MINILUV is equal in many ways to the security measures that have been implemented to the Houses of Parliament, that being concrete defence blocks have been placed all around the buildings, x - ray and metal detecting devices are inside, plenty of armed police within the buildings perimeters including sniper like hideouts and a mythical wonder as to what goes on within its doors.

It's also apparent here the fact that, the United Kingdom's "Ministry of Defence" is engaged in a foreign invasion upon the middle east which is a complete and total opposite of the meaning behind defence, this then gives the phrase "Doublethink" a more true to life meaning rather than associating it with fiction.

gmanz 3 / 5  
Jan 11, 2009   #2
In 1984, MINILUV (The Ministry of Love)

type the entire name first so...

in 1984, The Ministry of Love (MINILUV)

more formal that way
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Jan 12, 2009   #3
Wow, this gives me food for thought for the day, I'm going to have to read 1984.

The essay is great and well set up. I would twist up the last sentence in a way that gives more 'punch', and maybe add it to the paragraph above it.

Another startling oxymoron in which we can relate 1984 to modern day society is the fact that government legislation tells us that we must give up some of our own individual freedom and earnings to the state.

Good luck!

:)
EF_Sean 6 / 3460  
Jan 26, 2009   #4
Your essay is a promising first draft of how the modern world contains Orwellian elements. It has nothing to do with the issue of surveillance, however, which is a problem if your essay has to be on that particular topic. I don't mean that it drifts from the topic of surveillance -- I mean that it quite literally doesn't discuss it at all. So, if you have to write on that topic, you are going to have start over from scratch.

Otherwise, if the topic you have written on is okay, the main issue you face is that your examples jump around too much. You draw comparisons between the world of 1984 and America, Korea, and the UK. Pick one modern country (preferably America or the UK) and make it the basis of your comparisons. You might want to focus exclusively on the war on terror and how it has led to the development of Orwellian elements in modern society. If you do this, you should look also at the differences between the way the world really is and the way it is in Orwell's book. Many of the similarities are superficial -- the differences are far more interesting.


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