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The new finding - birds can avoid crashing in flight



BAMS14 18 / 21  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
WHY BIRD NEVER COLLIDE IN FLIGHT

The new finding, birds can avoid crahsing in flight, based on research they are have preference to veering right. In several observation with more sample birds who releas together in same time and same location, the result they are not collide each other. On the other hand they are flight different hight each others. Those behavior are duplicate to drone. The drone be equiped sensors to avoid hitting others object. In conclusion bird have unique behavior who can mantain each other in flight by coloni.

Yonathan 46 / 50  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
Hi Bams
Let me give you some advice...

The new finding, birds can avoid crahsing (crashing) in flight, based on research (...) sample birds who releas(realesed) together in same (...), the result they are(do) not collide each other.

... flight different hight (height) each others. Those behavior(behaviour) are duplicate to drone. The drone be equiped(equipped) sensors to avoid ...
... behavior who can mantain(maintain) each other in flight by coloni(colony).

1.Your summary is too short
2.Many misspell word

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