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Parkinson's disease may start in the gut and travel to the brain - speaking punishment



Pramudia27 34 / 52  
Dec 1, 2016   #1
Parkinson's disease may start in the gut and travel to the brain

Previously, people think that Parkison's disease is caused by brain cell damage, and these day it is predicted that it come from gut. This disease is one of sort deadly diseases. Eventhough, it can be prevent by some medicine, the influence of this disease can kill neutron within brain.

Thank to turn out of research that use mice as animal experiments, this disease is caused by unique bacteria in gun that maybe come from misconception medicine or influences of pesticides for farmers who use it . These bacteria are named synuclein which are able to travel to brain. If people can identify first location of this disease, patients can be saved by injecting certain medicines or antibiotics.

ifraanisa05 44 / 67  
Dec 1, 2016   #2
Hi, Pram here is my thoughts

thesethis day it is predicted that ...

it can be preventprevented by some medicine

... out of research that useuses mice as animal experiments,

... named synuclein which areis able to travel to brain.

Pram, by reading your summary, i know that you have a problem in subject-verb agreement.
I believe that you already understand the theory, but maybe you are in a rush so that you created many mistakes
please read your essay and pay attention to subject-verb agreement before you upload it.


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