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Ielts Practice Task 1: Production levels of the main fuels in the UK



sporty boy 1 / 1  
Feb 25, 2025   #1
The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.


The line chart shows the changes in the amount of some fundamental fuels generated in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
It can be seen that the three fuels did not remain flat but either incread or decreased significantly. More spefically, the rise of production belonged to Petroleum and Natural Gas whilst Coal had a moderate drop by the end of the period.

Starting at around 90, Petroleum fluctuated sereral times with the first peak of 140 recorded in 1984 and continued to maintain this level for four consecutives years. After a strong fall in 1990, it grew back to finish the year of 2000 with the figure as high as the first record.
With a production level of just 40 initially, less than 50% of Petroleum, Natural gas was the only fuel that almost stayed the same in the first years. However, the remaining years witnessed a steady growth and reached to 100 by 2000, becoming the second largest common fuel in the country, just ranked behind Petroleum.
In contrast to the two fuels mentioned before, only the manufacturing level of Coal had the downtrend, descending from 80 in 1981 to above 30 in 2000. A remarkable point of this energy happened in 1991 where it was surpassed by Natural Gas, and the fall kept going afterwards.

Overally, Petroleum with sharp fluctuations continued to stand as the most popular fuel while the other twos had switched their positions in the production.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15585  
Feb 27, 2025   #2
Starting at around 90

You did not mention that the numerical indicators are based on energy units. This leaves the reader a bit confused as to the measurement used in the presentation. This will cost you some TA and C+C rubic section deductions. Always reference all indicator information in your summary overview or trending statement to avoid these sorts of deductions.

After a strong fall in 1990

To what level? This is indicated in the image. You have to mention it so that the reader will fully understand your report. Failure to do so will result in additional C+C deductions. Get enough of these deductions and you will fail the essay based on your failure in one rubic alone.

Make sure to properly format you paragraph presentations. You need to clearly show 3 paragraphs for this essay at a minimum. Always clearly separate the paragraph presentations.

The last part is totally unnecessary. The task 1 essay does not require a conclusion or an overall statement at the end.
OP sporty boy 1 / 1  
Mar 6, 2025   #3
@Holt thanks for your help, I will be working on improving it based on your comments


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