IELTS: The process of apple how to be canned; 'apple tree'

The diagram shows the process of apple how to be canned.

Generally, there are many steps of apple to be canned. It is start from hand picking process until dispatch process.

To begin, the apple comes from the apple tree which is hand picking by farmer. Then, the apples are brought by large truck to fabric. In fabric, the apple washed and it is chosen where is a good quality and bad quality. Next, the apple is saved in cold storing so that the quality always to be guarded.

After in cold storing, the apple weighing and peeling. Then, it is corning before it get canning process. Next, the apple is sealing and cooking or sterilizing for keeping this product quickly expired. Then, this product is labeling and is saving in storage before dispatch.

To summary, the process canned of apple is not easy because must be realize more process.

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hi bomat ira...

i think it will better if you change

fabric = factory

.... this intro is not presented well :(
The diagram illustrates the detailed process of canning apples.


Overall there are fourteen stages that need to be completed for the total canning process of apples.


Everybody knows apples come from apple trees. It is no where shown in the diagram. All what you need to do is to report what you observe in the diagram;

First , the apples are hand picked and then transported for washing. Then the apples would be tested for quality and the ones that pass through quality test would be sent to cold stores.

this is how you should go about!

Yes, as dumi mentioned above, avoid telling things that are not presented in those pictures. This task is to assess your report writing skills and stick to your observations only. Nothing should be said outside what they have shown in the pictures. I suggest you to re do this whole exercise and post it here again for us to provide our comments for further improvement :)

i think better if you give more explanation