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A Social Network Aims to Speed Up Progress in Science


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Aug 12, 2016   #1
University studies had an experiment about scientific network to related to academics and spread the information. ResearchGate site aim to make scientists more productive. People can access ResearchGate and they can find out about what other researchers made on before they shown their results. Investors appreciate the idea, belonging a former Facebook executive and the same investment group that put money into Twitter. So far, over four million people have signed up as members of ResearchGate.

Caroline Moore-Kochlacs at Boston University was users and she is doctoral adviser also. she like to follow other researchers and join into group pages that discuss different subjects. Previously, she is using Facebook but she said that all of people which using Facebook never discuss about science.

Ijad Madisch as founder of ResearchGate said that his site will merely worthed if scientist use it to help each other. But not for all users liked with it.
akbarmappiare 31 / 469 275  
Aug 12, 2016   #2
Hi Sestria..
Welcome to Essay Forum. Fortunately, you can improve your writing here.
I have read your creation closely. In my point of view, you need to practice again and again. I will give you a few notes to enhance your ability


... an experiment about A scientific network to (...) and spread the information. ResearchGate site aimS to make scientists more productive. People can access ResearchGate and they can find out about what other ...

So far Consequently, over four million people ...

... at Boston University was users and she is ALSO A doctoral adviser also . she likeS to follow other researchers and joinS into group pages ...
Previously, she is HAS BEEN using Facebook, but she said that all of people which WHO USE using Facebook never discuss about THE science.
Ijad Madisch as A founder of ResearchGate said that his site will BE merely worthed if scientistS use it to help each otherS. But HOWEVER, not for all users liked with it.

NOTE: First of all, you should pay attention to the use of verb agreement. You sometimes forgot changes of the verb. Following that, you should beautify your flow in your writing. I suggest you learn about transitive words.Last, Be careful to harness article (a/an/the)

I personally believe you will show better progress the next step.
Happy Writing.
Rinnegan45 - / 39 5  
Aug 12, 2016   #3
Hi there!

just some simple corrections would not hurt, yeah? :D

here: ... experiment about scientific network to related to academics ...
ResearchGate siteS aim to make scientists more productive.
... about what other researchers made on before they shown their results. Investors appreciate the idea, belonging that belongs to a former Facebook ...

Caroline Moore-Kochlacs at Boston University was a users and she is a doctoral adviser also. she likeS to follow other researchers and joinS into group pages that discuss different subjects. Previously, she iswas using Facebook but she said that all of people whichwhoare using Facebook never ...

Ijad Madisch as founder of ResearchGate said that his site will merely worthedit if scientist use it to ...
But not for all users liked with it.

Thanks.


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