Sports heroes in the field of badminton in Indonesia

Summary Article: Tontowi Ahmad, the golden boy alongside Liliyana Natsir

Indonesian citizens cheered shortly after know sports heroes in the field of badminton Tontowi Ahmad and Liliyana Natsir out as a winner gold medalist in Rio De Janeiro in brazil. Tontowi was born in Banyumas regency in Central Java on July 18, 1987. The father to Danish Arsenio Ahmad and husband to Michelle Harminc first tried his hands on badminton when he was a third-grade elementary school student. Before paired with Liliyana Natsir (senior athletes) in 2010, he has get important achievements, including the gold medal at the Vietnam Open Grand Prix 2007. While clearly Liliyana Natsir has become the queen of Indonesian badminton mixed-doubles. Many achievements of the collaboration between Tontowi and Liliyana Natsir. Since 2010, Tontowi and Liliyana have made Indonesia proud through their achievements, ranging from their first victory together in the 2011 Malaysia Open GP Gold in the All England Super Series Premier and the Swiss Open Grand Prix Gold 2012, and their last victory when the Olympics in Rio DeJjaneiro in Brazil and get a gold medals.

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