The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008.

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The table below illustrate the comparison between the number of guests and their average spending from 2003 to 2008.

Overall the figure all statistics witnessed steady, though slight, increases over the period, the opposite was true for the average stay, which had a modest decline.

In 2003, the UK received approximately 24.7 million visitors, who had spent £11.855 billion. The number of visitors continuously increased to 32 million guests by 2006, and only dropping by 2008 from 32.778 million visitors to 31.888 visitors in 2008. The total amount of money rose drastically to £16,002 billion in 2006, it a declined to 15.960 in 2007, but it picked up again and peaked at £16.323 billion in 2008

It is clear that visitors stayed in 2003 was 8.2 nights, while they spent an average of £478 per visit. The average stay had a slight growth from 8.2 per visit in 2003 to 8.4 per visit in 2006, before decreasing to an average of 7.7 nights in 2007 and 2008, marking a relative small drop in the final stage of period. The average amount of money spent per visit tended to fluctuate each year, but peaked up in 2008 at £511

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You cannot make statements of fact or finality in this presentation because you are only to report on the provided information, leaving any decisions or final observations for the reader to make.

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