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Ways of Bird Migration - it has fascinated many observers for centuries.



Qaranewlagi52 4 / 8  
Sep 19, 2016   #1
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Ways of Bird Migration


Many tipes and ways of animals for migrate, but bird migration has fascinated observers for centuries. Migration is an excellent example of how nature has responded to the biological imperative for species to evolve. The most common form of bird migration occurs two time in a year during the breeding periode in the spring and the autumn, most bird migration take place between the lower and higher latitudes of the northern hemisphere, an various also most bird migration with another variety some spesies exhibit altitudinal migration their breeding areas are in higher elevations near of the peak mountains, on the other hand most birds fly for a limited periode each day probably about six to eight hours. and Nocturnal migrants those species that travel at night with cues from the stars as their navigation.

rizaldohabibie 19 / 34  
Sep 19, 2016   #2
hi..
is quite understanable essay..
however, i would give some suggestions..

Many tipes[types] and ways of animals for[to] migrate,
>> 'tipes' perhaps you were not aware about it
>> migrate is verb so the word before it should be to infinitive

I hope it helps


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