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To winning a match, race or competition, an athlete uses not only his muscles but also extreme focus



Alamsyah Ismail 24 / 38  
Sep 15, 2016   #1
EILTS Writing Task 3 Athlete: not just about muscles

There is a true statement that say to be great hand and winning a match, an athlete not only uses muscles but also needs focus. Focus ,in one word is colaborate between eyes and brain, used by athlete for have an eye for the object and the rival on the field. For example, football player, fast movement of ball, large and egde of court, rapidity and other players position to be centre focus. Focus can scan the object when athlete often sharpen the ability in training and practicing. The area also give athlete focus ability such as colour and brightness of field, jersey colour composite, and all of that can divert the player's attention.

PHA2016 39 / 38  
Sep 15, 2016   #2
Hello Alamsyah,

There is a true statement that [is ] say to be great hand and ...

Focus ,in one word is colaborate collaborate between eyes and brain,[it ] used by athlete for have ...

Focus can on scan the object when ...

hope these help
ALMAJID06 4 / 9  
Sep 15, 2016   #3
there is a true statement that say to be (use article a) great hand and winning a match, an athlete ... ( use S+V+O+CON+S+V .....

Focus ,in (focuse on) one word is colaborate (wrong spelling) between eyes and brain,...
For example (such as), football player, (...), large and egde (wrong selling) of court, rapidity ...
Fatirtalent 12 / 17  
Sep 23, 2016   #4
There is a true statement that say to be great hand and winning a match, an athlete not only uses muscles but also needs focus

there is a true statement stated that to be winner, an athlete not only need to exercise muscle but only concentration.

note: you need to paraphrase your word in order to enrich vocabularies on your writing.


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