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Every year, more computers are used for instruction in classroom. Is this good or bad?


ejmonstar 1 / -  
Oct 23, 2018   #1
intro only please advise .... ive been struggling with my introductions- attempting to take the cbest again!

The impact of computers presence at schools



Every year, more and more computers are used for instruction. Is this good or bad? Discuss and explain your opinion on the growing use of computer-assisted instruction in the classroom. Support your opinion with specific examples from your personal experience, readings, or general knowledge.

P1- As technology advances our society is continuously faced with difficult decisions, weather to implement the tech or continue with the current process. Throughout recent years computer assisted instruction within classrooms has significantly increased. As a former student and current parent of two students, I have personally seen the positive impacted computer-assisted instruction has had within the classroom. Computer-assisted instruction offers a dynamic learning experience, allows for greater continuity between teacher and students, and prepares students for the world of tomorrow.

P2- Computers offer a wide range of benefits traditional chalkboards and projectors cannot compete with......

hichamsamma 1 / 2 1  
Oct 24, 2018   #2
general feedback: it will be good if you can paraphrase the question with some details about your oponion, and the other details as your experiences make them a support sentences in the body of the essay.

grammatical advice:
put a comma when you finish this kind of sentences: As technology advances,
don't use difficult styles if you don't master them


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