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This essay is on the epilogue on the book "Hatchet"
Also, i coulnt find a title for it... any ideas??
The events that happened in the epilogue did really surprise me. I personally like most of them, but some I don't. For example, a thirteen years old boy survived for forty-four days in the Canadian wilderness is quite surprising since most thirteen years old do not have the skills or knowledge to survive. I also found the media only paying attention to Brian for a short period of time is unfair, and I found it almost shocking to learn that had Brian been rescued later, he might have died due to on coming winter conditions.
To begin with, I think there is one thing that mostly surprised people that a thirteen years old boy survived in the woods all alone for forty-four days. Then what happened to Brain changed him for the rest of his life, such as his ability to observe how things happen and became more thoughtful. He would cherish all the goods he could get, try to eat those foods he did not like before.
The media interviewed him and people talk and discuss about it only for a few months! I think this is unseasonable; things like this should be more popular. One thing they should really do is try to make a movie about it! It will be a fantastic film. I think people will be attracted to it because it's based on a true story and it could be inspiring teenagers nowadays.
Now, I'm shocked after know what's going to happen if he wasn't in time! For instance, in winter, the lake would freeze and he wouldn't be able to fish. The temperature will decrease and he had no proper clothes for winter time. He's been wearing the same shirt and jeans since the day one. Therefore, he could probably die from the coldness. Next, other savage animals would come in scene and attacked him. All these circumstance above make it very hard for Brian to go through winter.
At last, I was disappointed to find out about Brian's parent's relationship after his rescue. They were happy that their son's still alive and it looked like they might even get back together. Unfortunately, things didn't turn out as he wanted. His father went back to his oil fields. His mother stayed and continued to see the guy. I don't like this part very well. It would be great if they can actually get back together.
Overall, I really liked the ending. As I mentioned above, Brian's parents should have gotten back together because... after reading the story, I can say that Brian is a very brave man and I am very proud of him. Additionally, he deserves more fame.
I personally like most of them, but some I don't.
To begin with, I think there is one thing that mostly surprised people that a thirteen years old boy survived in the woods all alone for forty-four days. Then what happened to Brain changed him for the rest of his life, such as his ability to observe how things happen, and became more thoughtful.
I think people will be attracted to it because it's based on a true story and it could be inspiring teenagers nowadays.
Now, I'm shocked after know what's going to happen if he wasn't in time!
This essay is on the epilogue on the book "Hatchet"
Also, i coulnt find a title for it... any ideas??
The events that happened in the epilogue did really surprise me. I personally like most of them, but some I don't. For example, a thirteen years old boy survived for forty-four days in the Canadian wilderness is quite surprising since most thirteen years old do not have the skills or knowledge to survive. I also found the media only paying attention to Brian for a short period of time is unfair, and I found it almost shocking to learn that had Brian been rescued later, he might have died due to on coming winter conditions.
To begin with, I think there is one thing that mostly surprised people that a thirteen years old boy survived in the woods all alone for forty-four days. Then what happened to Brain changed him for the rest of his life, such as his ability to observe how things happen and became more thoughtful. He would cherish all the goods he could get, try to eat those foods he did not like before.
The media interviewed him and people talk and discuss about it only for a few months! I think this is unseasonable; things like this should be more popular. One thing they should really do is try to make a movie about it! It will be a fantastic film. I think people will be attracted to it because it's based on a true story and it could be inspiring teenagers nowadays.
Now, I'm shocked after know what's going to happen if he wasn't in time! For instance, in winter, the lake would freeze and he wouldn't be able to fish. The temperature will decrease and he had no proper clothes for winter time. He's been wearing the same shirt and jeans since the day one. Therefore, he could probably die from the coldness. Next, other savage animals would come in scene and attacked him. All these circumstance above make it very hard for Brian to go through winter.
At last, I was disappointed to find out about Brian's parent's relationship after his rescue. They were happy that their son's still alive and it looked like they might even get back together. Unfortunately, things didn't turn out as he wanted. His father went back to his oil fields. His mother stayed and continued to see the guy. I don't like this part very well. It would be great if they can actually get back together.
Overall, I really liked the ending. As I mentioned above, Brian's parents should have gotten back together because... after reading the story, I can say that Brian is a very brave man and I am very proud of him. Additionally, he deserves more fame.
I personally like most of them, but some I don't.
To begin with, I think there is one thing that mostly surprised people that a thirteen years old boy survived in the woods all alone for forty-four days. Then what happened to Brain changed him for the rest of his life, such as his ability to observe how things happen, and became more thoughtful.
I think people will be attracted to it because it's based on a true story and it could be inspiring teenagers nowadays.
Now, I'm shocked after know what's going to happen if he wasn't in time!