hpscotsgirl 1 / 3 Oct 12, 2010 #1could i write about being assaulted? if so, how can i write an essay about it without being too cheesy /vying for pity points?
fjfjfjf - / 13 Oct 14, 2010 #2I'd say why not, with one caveat:Personal stories such as these can easily get TOO personal very quickly. In my opinion, you want to give a sense of who you are, how your identity was shaped by this event, and not get into the weeds (i.e. thick description) of such an encounter, if that makes sense.In a broader sense, taking a life experience and interrogating/analyzing how/why this affected you, drove you to take a stance, etc. are great ways to differentiate you from other applicants. It's all in how you construct the narrative/essay. I just gave this advice to someone else, but it may be worth repeating here. I like to tackle this personal issues as a sort of outside observer, as if you are a news reporter or something and describing what happened instead of reliving the event yourself. Does that make sense? Of course, I could be totally off base and you should go with your gut and see what happens.Good luck to you.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Oct 15, 2010 #3Personal stories such as these can easily get TOO personal very quickly.Yes, that is right. Sometimes it seems like instead of writing a quality essay people are using the essay writing as an opportunity for some therapy... expressing themselves for personal reasons instead of putting together a strong essay.Write about being assaulted, but make it a means to an end. Make it so that the essay is actually about something more.:-)