Criminal justice - can someone check my thesis statement?

The Criminal Justice field is a widely growing field there are many types of openings in this field.

Instead of making it choppy, you can make it 1 sentence.

The Criminal Justice field is a widely growing field, which has many types of openings.

Kareem is right.. it was a run on sentence before!

Also, it is too general. How about saying something specific and interesting about the nature of the field. The way you wrote it... the same could be said of almost any field...

I look forward to seeing the essay! :-))

Kareem

that's better it makes more sense,yours was a run on kind of sentence.

*please help me proofread my essay as soon as you can

Encasing many different fields, criminal justice is a broad subject

Criminal justice system through the eye of a minority -how to write a creative essay?

I need to know how to write a creative essay which describe in the criminal justice system through the eye of a minority, you may take the role of victims, perpetrator prisoner, police officer, lawyer or correctional officer

Your personal thoughts and opinions may supply you with enough creativity. For instance put your self in a situation where you are a police officer protecting someone who is part of a minority, or being a lawyer and having to defend someone who is part of a minority. Then flip the script, you become the minority in need of protection. Another idea is how to deal with a minority group being assaulted in jails and you being a correction officer, how would you deal with it.