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(my dreams as a topic) - evocative essay

twisted_angel 1 / -  
May 6, 2011   #1
im trying my best to work on this hw due tomorrow. i choice my dreams as a topic. problem is, theres a lot i want to do. like make a difference in the world and in my country as well. eradicate poverty and make donations for charities.

help me.

xxkixzplayaxx 4 / 10  
May 6, 2011   #2
just to let you know, if it's due tomorrow.. you are screwed. should'v posted earlier
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
May 7, 2011   #3
For this sort of thing, you need to narrow the scope. Focus on one or two things, or focus on several but connect them with one theme that is common to them all. Know what I mean? You probably already write something great. But I just want to mention this:

When you write an essay and have some trouble, start with a PARAGRAPH TOPIC SENTENCE. It expresses an idea that is important to you. Then, give an example to show what you mean. Then, give a few more thoughtful sentences about that idea.

Do not worry about the whole essay. Just do one para at a time. When you have a few paragraphs, go back and write an introduction.


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