argumentative thesis statement suggestions
i am taking summer school and i tried to research on global warming and endangered species. however, i found some information on it and made a thesis statement "The human impact of global warming is affecting endangered species in United states of America". But my professor wants me to build a new thesis statement such that it explains Global warming is caused by human and suggestions for how to stop global warming to protect endangered species?. In addition, she wants my thesis to be argumentative. Any suggestions for argumentative thesis statement from you guys????? please i would appreciate the help. i am just 3 days away from the due date of my final essay. thanks in advance. ;)
I have a suggestion for a title which is "Is Human Activity Primarily Responsible for Global Climate Change? ".Sorry in advance if it isn't good
@ms85644
thanks for the title. it would be great if you could suggest me thesis statement based on the title. :)
Holt Educational Consultant - / 15169
4859 Zayn, both the thesis statement that you wrote and the suggested thesis title to you will both be rejected by your professor due to the vagueness or wideness of the possible topics for discussion. You need to narrow it down to one specific animal, environment or natural habitat, and proposed solution. My proposal is that you choose an animal of interest to you and work on developing your original thesis statement from there. If I were to develop a title for this essay, my title would be similar to "The Dwindling of the Shark Population is Due to the Harvesting of Their Fins For Human Consumption". The thesis statement will be, "There is a belief that man's interest in eating Shark's Fin based dishes has resulted in a dwindling population due to illegal harvesting of the fish fins by shark fishermen who throw the sharks back into the sea, alive, but bleeding to death, after fin harvesting. In this essay, I will argue that the actions of man do not represent the demise of the shark but rather, it is only a small factor when compared to the effects of global warming on the ocean, the sharks habitat. It is global warming and not fin harvesting that causes the endangerment of the species." This type of title and thesis statement is narrow enough to be accepted by your professor due to the focused research it represents.
@Holt
thank you so much @holt. My actual plan was to discuss what is global warming, who causes it, what are its effects and how it's affecting polar bear, American pika and coral reef in united states. but my professor wants me to build a thesis statement which should explain the solutions or alternatives to protect the previously mentioned species. I am so confused as she wants the thesis statement to be argumentative plus it should have a counter argument. please, guys, i am in deep need of help. hope a quick response. thanks in advance though.