Is this an "okay" thesis to go with for my Hamlet essay?
Hamlet should not be considered a "noble hero", because of his lack of alacrity and prolonging his revenge on Claudius. Instead, he wastes time in prolonging his revenge on Claudius. Because of this, a few more people suffer and die. Hamlet's lack of confidence results in chaos and suffering.
Please give some criticism!! I'm not the best when it comes to writing essays.
oh god i screwed up... Please ignore the repetitive line "Instead, he wastes time in prolonging his revenge on Claudius". It wasnt meant to be there :S
So...what you meant was this:
Hamlet should not be considered a "noble hero", because of his lack of alacrity and prolonging his revenge on Claudius. Because of this, a few more people suffer and die. Hamlet's lack of confidence results in chaos and suffering.
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If so, it's still too long.
You could write separate essays about any one of several ideas you've put forth here.
Would you mind posting the essay question?
yeah... thats what I meant...
Here's your thesis:
By no means can Hamlet be considered a noble hero.
But isnt that a bit too short??
Why would you say that?
It does what a thesis is supposed to do: it answers the essay question in a general way.
Some teachers incorrectly give other instructions.
What did he or she say?
I should state my opinion, along with a supporting fact.
I've never heard of such a thing.
Facts are the evidence you use in the body of your essay.
Facts SUPPORT your thesis.
I know...but my teacher's weird... He wants me to have a supporting fact to go along with why I think Hamlet should not be considered a noble being.
When's the essay due?
Next week on friday
Have you written anything else yet?
so far just a few supporting facts..
Stop agonizing over the thesis.
You'll do the introduction last.
I need the essay question in your teacher's words.
It is short but I like this. But you should talk about why Hamlet hate Claudius and King Hamlet.
