I need help with the 1st paragraph and I need advice on thesis & descriptive hook : this is what I Have:One time or another I had to cook whether for myself, family, friends or even fora special occasion. i would do it according to the way I was taught. Cooking can be acheived by many different techniques. There are basic and traditional aspects of cooking such as stove top, baking, grilling and barbeque. As I cook, I use my imagination to create dishes that also are influence by latin tradition. please help...
Ideas about creative essay about cooking
I don't know what kind of food you cook but here is something you can try. You can write a story, unless if it's informative
I burned my third chicken. Frustrated, I threw the piece of black coal into the trash as i turned right back into the recipe book. It clearly said three cups of water while adding four table spoons of sugar, so why didn't the product come out to be as engaging and mouth watery as in the illustrations. I glanced at the clock. I had two hours left to come up with something for mom's birthday, avoided the thought of ruin everyone's plan for a surprise party. I never knew something my mom did as a routine everyday could be so hard.
That's my example not that great lol, try to come up with something better. Good luck
I burned my third chicken. Frustrated, I threw the piece of black coal into the trash as i turned right back into the recipe book. It clearly said three cups of water while adding four table spoons of sugar, so why didn't the product come out to be as engaging and mouth watery as in the illustrations. I glanced at the clock. I had two hours left to come up with something for mom's birthday, avoided the thought of ruin everyone's plan for a surprise party. I never knew something my mom did as a routine everyday could be so hard.
That's my example not that great lol, try to come up with something better. Good luck
thank you for your input, i will try to put it into use.
Hey, Ryan's example is a meaningful one... it is great, because it shows a demonstration of how to muster some inspiration for this kind of thing.
You need to let your mind wander, pouring over the subject, and wait until you hear the voice of your mind say something that is rhythmic and intriguing: I burned my third chicken.'(Hell yes you burned your third chicken! This is an intro that compels me to read more.)
So, take Ryan's example and start by saying something UNEXPECTED!
You need to let your mind wander, pouring over the subject, and wait until you hear the voice of your mind say something that is rhythmic and intriguing: I burned my third chicken.'(Hell yes you burned your third chicken! This is an intro that compels me to read more.)
So, take Ryan's example and start by saying something UNEXPECTED!
thank you...I did take ryan advise..
why dont you try telling a particular story, about a situation you faced cooking..a relevant one of course because anyone can say "I love cooking" give it a personal touch showing your love for cooking
hope this helps!
hope this helps!
