Immeasurable. Endless. Indefinite. I am not bounded. College of Charleston

Charleston is my top choice and has been for most of high school. I have decent grades and a decent SAT score so I'm hoping that my essay will really help me stand out. This is the beginning to my essay...inspired by The Perks of Being a Wallflower. I'm not sure if I should expand on this idea or take a completely different approach. Please offer your feedback! Thanks

What one word would you use to describe yourself? Why does that word best describe you? (Maximum 250 words)

Infinite

Immeasurable. Endless. Indefinite. I am not bounded. I have no limits. I cannot be measured, nor described in just one simple word.

Hi Kali,

Well, you are on the right track. Now, you will need to expound on these and other thoughts as you continue with your essay. Try to tell the readers "why" you chose to describe yourself as "infinite." Use some other words that can be used to describe your thoughts. Try to separate the essay into four paragraphs, each one describing a different reason why you chose this word, and then you can use the last paragraph to sum up your ideas and come to a conclusion.

--Mark :)