Introduction-contrast, it needs to be long and catchy

I am working on an introduction. it needs to be long and catchy. I think what i have right now is a "contrast" type introduction. i need your help in developing it pls. here is what i have so far..

Having a good job does not seem to happen to many people especially for their first job. A lot of workers today are working but does not like what they are doing at all. Looking for a decent nice job does not come to everyone very easily. I felt very lucky to be not part of those many people. I was fortunate that I loved my first job, and I consider it the best. It was an easy job, has a good pay and nice workplace.

Good morning.

As you did not include the prompt or assignment with the post, I can edit what you have for grammar and mechanics only:

"Having a good job does not seem to happen to many people, especially for their first job. A lot of workers today are working but do not like what they are doing at all. Looking for a decent nice job does not come to everyone easily . I felt very lucky to be not part of those many people. I was fortunate that I loved my first job, and I consider it the best. It was an easy job, paid a decent wage, and was a nice workplace."

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Gloria
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hello gloria,
thank you for that.

the prompt will be, i need to make an introductory paragraph, about 10 sentences. The intro should have a common method (like a warm-up before my topic sentence). The methods are either..

broad statement
contrast
relevance
anecdote
question or
quotation

I think that what i am doing is a contrast method. I started with an opposite idea of the topic that I will develop. I started with many people having bad jobs, but in fact my topic would be me having my best job.

thank you