overseas nursing programme: how to write a perfect academic essay?

hi,
i have been trying for ielts academic module since 2008.I need band 7 in each module for my overseas nursing programme.Most of the times I could score 7 in all other modules. I haven't scored 7 in writing yet now.If anybody can help me ,by giving tips,to write a perfect essay please help me.

I am not an expert about the test, but I hope some people in these forums will be able to tell you more.

I can tell you how a perfect essay can be, though.

First sentence hooks the attention.
Last sentence of first paragraph is a meaningful, memorable, arguable thesis statement that is specific enough to be interesting.

First sentence of each body paragraph is a topic sentence that makes a point of observation that shows that your thesis is true.
Second sentence of each body paragraph explains what you mean.
third sentence gives an example or quotation.
fourth sentence reflects on the point made in the topic sentence and/or uses a word that will be used in the topic sentence of the next body paragraph (i.e. makes a transition).

Each body paragraph is like that.

Finally, write a conclusion.

**** Post your writing here so we can correct your errors!

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