Can someone help revise and detail my outline on the Julio-Claudian Dynasty

Outline

I. Definition of a dynasty/Thesis statement
II. Who the Julio-Claudian dynasty consisted of/What is was
III. Augustus-Life/Death, Accomplishments
IV. Tiberius- Life/Death, Accomplishments
V. Caligula- Life/Death, Accomplishments
VI. Claudius- Life/Death, Accomplishments
VII. Nero- Life/Death, Accomplishments
VIII. Their effect on Rome
IX. Conclusion

I. Definiton of a dynasty/ Theme staement + Thesis staement. ( Theme statement is more general whereas thesis statement is specific. Your theme staement will support your thesis statement and help you to go deep).

Do you have to prove any point about what you think about the dynasty / you just need to write about the dynasty. If you do not have to write about your opinion then your theme stement shuld be very strong.

And i think you are organized well.

I. Definition of a dynasty/Thesis statement
Make a meaningful, interesting thesis statement that says something thoughtful about the dynasties...
II. Who the Julio-Claudian dynasty consisted of/What is was

III. Augustus-
A Life
B.Accomplishments
IV. Tiberius-
A Life
B.Accomplishments
V. Caligula-
A Life
B.Accomplishments
VI. Claudius-
A Life
B.Accomplishments
VII. Nero-
A Life
B.Accomplishments
VIII. Their Collective Effects on Rome
IX. Conclusion
A. Repeat the thoughtful thesis statement, and conclude...