Can someone give me advise on how to write a great introduction for the following prompts? I want to learn how to create an opening paragraph that will grab the reader's attention right from the get-go.
The two prompts are:
1. Tell us a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it.
I wanted to write an essay about how I have learned to balance out my activities while overcoming many challenges. For example, I compete in track & field, I'm involved with community service, I'm really focused on my academics (AP classes), and I have to watch what I spend due to my family's financial issues.
2.Describe an experience of cultural difference or insensitivity you have had or observed. What did you learn from it?
I'm half chinese and my first language was Cantonese. I'm often mistaken for either being Latino or sometimes Japanese. I lean towards my asian side since I always hang out/ visit my asian cousins. I celebrate chinese new years and of course, I love tea and rice!
Any advise or opinions are welcome!
The two prompts are:
1. Tell us a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it.
I wanted to write an essay about how I have learned to balance out my activities while overcoming many challenges. For example, I compete in track & field, I'm involved with community service, I'm really focused on my academics (AP classes), and I have to watch what I spend due to my family's financial issues.
2.Describe an experience of cultural difference or insensitivity you have had or observed. What did you learn from it?
I'm half chinese and my first language was Cantonese. I'm often mistaken for either being Latino or sometimes Japanese. I lean towards my asian side since I always hang out/ visit my asian cousins. I celebrate chinese new years and of course, I love tea and rice!
Any advise or opinions are welcome!