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'college encounters with different people' - application



Riddi 7 / 16  
Dec 9, 2011   #1
I am applying for a graduate program where the application asks me, "What did you enjoy most in your undergraduate academic experience?*" to which my response :

"One thing that I enjoyed the most in my undergraduate academic experience was what I learnt through my off college encounters with different people talking myriad of topics on social networking websites and my past internships. Both of these experiences proved eye openers for me and exposed me to a new world where people talked and discussed about real topics. Some of the topics which really influenced me and changed entirely my reading list were the discussions on Libertarianism, objectivism and democracy and its importance in the Indian context. I was introduced to the writings of Henry Hazlitt, Fredric Bastiat, H.L Mencken to name a few which changed my perspectives on economics, freedom and individual rights."

Would like to know if it sounds contextual to the question asked and the scope for improving it.! Needs an honest critique!

Riddhi :)

Tobi 6 / 10  
Dec 9, 2011   #2
What did you enjoy - it would better if you add some INTERESTING things, more vivid situations would be very suitable


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