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Who or what influenced you to apply to Syracuse University?
My interest in Syracuse University sparked when I realized it was not just the rankings that made Syracuse, but how unique and special the university itself is.
I believe Syracuse's melting pot of cultures, social atmosphere, and community involvement make it an ideal place for me to study. I am aware that Syracuse's brilliant students don't just solely focus their energy into to academics, but also into social life. I am excited to find that the campus life is so diverse so I can meet and compete with talented students from allover the world, by which I can gain knowledge of different cultures and Interests.
When I met Syracuse students they spoke with great admiration and love for their university. At Syracuse I look forward to a being part of a community, made up of students who take great pride in their university.
Syracuse being heavily involved in helping the community gives me a chance to continue my passion for tutoring, I plan to work with Learn To Be foundation chapter at Syracuse to continue my passion for touring students, L2B provides free online tutoring for underserved students nationwide.
Not only does Syracuse have an accredited Computer Science program, the University also gives me the opportunity to engage in significant research experiences with talented professors. Syracuse can challenge me academically and provide me with great life experience through their student organization and campus events. I could see myself wearing Syracuse's orange color proudly.
Who or what influenced you to apply to Syracuse University?
My interest in Syracuse University sparked when I realized it was not just the rankings that made Syracuse, but how unique and special the university itself is.
I believe Syracuse's melting pot of cultures, social atmosphere, and community involvement make it an ideal place for me to study. I am aware that Syracuse's brilliant students don't just solely focus their energy into to academics, but also into social life. I am excited to find that the campus life is so diverse so I can meet and compete with talented students from allover the world, by which I can gain knowledge of different cultures and Interests.
When I met Syracuse students they spoke with great admiration and love for their university. At Syracuse I look forward to a being part of a community, made up of students who take great pride in their university.
Syracuse being heavily involved in helping the community gives me a chance to continue my passion for tutoring, I plan to work with Learn To Be foundation chapter at Syracuse to continue my passion for touring students, L2B provides free online tutoring for underserved students nationwide.
Not only does Syracuse have an accredited Computer Science program, the University also gives me the opportunity to engage in significant research experiences with talented professors. Syracuse can challenge me academically and provide me with great life experience through their student organization and campus events. I could see myself wearing Syracuse's orange color proudly.
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