Got to trim the boring part away from the beginning:
In my initial search for a course to undertake for my Undergraduate studies, I had never considered a computer related field. Although I had above average computer knowledge, it seems I took a course in Computer Science almost by accident.--Now THIS is a great first sentence for an essay. Very cool, very interesting. All essays must start with a great, intriguing sentence like this.
Since then, my desire for knowledge
into about the workings of ...
...see most problems as
something matters that can be handled with good software.
Every day, I set out to do my best
the best I can in my chosen field of in the field of Software Development.
I desire to be a software entrepreneur, leading innovation in not just software development but also in the broader aspects...