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(a graduate in Electronics and Communication Engineering) - Statement of purpose


er_anurag 1 / -  
Feb 17, 2012   #1
Statement of Purpose

The secret of success lies in knowledge and hard work. Through research and experience one can achieve a cutting edge, proficiency in any field and thus realize ones professional ambition. Whenever I pause by to analyze my stand of knowledge, I feel that I have learnt little and that there is an ocean, of unknown and fascinating wealth of knowledge, yet to be explored. Education is like an edifice based on strong rudiments and strengthened by the fundamentals and practical skills.

I, Anurag Pareek, an engineering graduate in Electronics and Communication Engineering, have maintained a good academic record right from my schooling. The prospect of being among the forefront of knowledge and perhaps contribute to it, made me take up a career in science and technology. This ambition has been my interest in pursuing greater studies at your university which is another step towards attaining my goal. After completing my Senior Higher Secondary (10+2) level with good academic percentage of 90%, I secured admission to undergraduate studies at the Sri Balaji College of Engineering and Technology, Jaipur, recognized by University of Rajasthan, Jaipur and affiliated to All India Council of Technical Education (AICTE), one of the premiere educational institutions of India. I selected Electronics and Communication as my major as I was fascinated by the course as the electronics and communication become an essential in our daily life.

In engineering my prime interest was in research and technological advancements. I was one of the favorite students of my teachers and always been supported by them. I have been taught many subjects but I have interest in Wireless Communication and Networks, Antenna Theory and Digital Signal Processing the most. I also worked on a project of making a control card that can be used to control home and industrial appliances from a remote place using internet, under the guidance of my professor.

Education, I believe is a life long process. I, therefore, wish to pursue a post graduate degree after my graduate degree. I, therefore approach to my mentor Mr. Bhavani Singh who always helped me to shape my career. After a long discussion with him I decided to go for masters in Germany. Although my desire was to pursue MS just after the graduation, but he suggests me to do MS after one or two year experience. He explained me that pursuing master after a work experience will be more helpful to build a successful career. Presently I am working in Ericsson India Pvt Ltd as a Test Method Development engineer, where I am using my skills and knowledge to develop a better test environment to produce the best quality RF product.

Germany is a vibrant, colorful and rich country with great history of its success. It has a strong, developed and well maintained education system which helps one to achieve great success in one's life. Germany has a prominent position in its engineering not only in Europe but also in all over the world. The German universities provide wide variety of courses with specific knowledge of field with a great practical knowledge in the labs of universities. My earnest desire to continue my future studies at your university stems from that it is one of the top colleges in Germany having fine record of academic excellence and is backed up by expert faculty and research facilities.

In a nutshell my aim is to learn the new technology so that I can use it for humanity as well as my country. I believe that after completing the MS from your university, I would be able to do better for my country as well as the world.

May God bless help me to achieve my sublime vision.

Regards,
Anurag Pareek
abhijeetnayak 1 / 10  
Feb 17, 2012   #2
Hi Anurag,

I will give my opinion about the content of the essay. Wait for someone to comment about the Grammar.

Here are my views about your essay:

1. Your essay is weak. It does not highlight what are your strengths.
2. First para is boring. Everyone knows what is education and how it can shape ones future. Try to link how it can shape your future.

Sincerely, I did not get a picture about your qualification, strengths and your ambition after reading your essay. But your writing style is very good. :)

-Abhijeet
Glorenet - / 3  
Feb 18, 2012   #3
Your essay is for sure very weak. Observe punctuations, grammar, article use, but I cannot mention all here.


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