My name is sandeep kumar iam gradute iam married i have two children my mother is house wife and my wife is also house wife unfortunately I lost my father recently i have four brother and sisters all got married and settled
Pls explain in better way for interview
Lack of punctuation, spelling and grammar (a lot!). You should be careful of these crucial three.
I couldn't understand what you ask help for, you can elucidate us. :)
Hello, My name is sandeep kumar. I am gradute , married with two children. Both my mother and and my wife are house wives. Unfortunetly I have recently lost my father . I have four brother and sisters all got married and settled.
Is that what you were asking for??
Some more background information might be helpful here. What sort of interview is this for? What is your main purpose in the interview? Why do you think you will be asked about your relatives? If we knew the answers to these questions, we would have a much better idea of how to help you.
Rosomond, I think that is what was needed! Cool. I agree with Sean, though, that we need more info. However, that might be tough if Sandeep is still trying to learn English.
Here is what I thought about it:
My name is Sandeep Kumar, and I am a gradute from [name of school]. I am married, and I have two children. My four brother and sisters all got married and settled far from home. My mother is a housewife, and my wife is also a housewife. Unfortunately, I lost my father recently, and he had been an important resource for all of us.
Rosomond, I think that is what was needed! Cool
Not compared to you! :)
