Hi guys,
I'm in a difficult situation, the deadline is next two days and I need to write two essays, the first one is "In the space provided below, list any honours or awards that you feel are relevant to this application. Include dates and a short description.
Please do not exceed 1750 characters or 25 lines in length"
the second one is "Please list below your outside interests that are not directly related to your university degree.
Please do not exceed 1750 characters or 25 lines."
I need 2 great hooks for both of them. Also, I need your great suggestions for the first essay after having a look on it, Pleeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!
To fulfillment of a big dream I had to divide my life dream into steps that can be achieved gradually. So, my several simple steps toward my goal were to get th highest possible grades in my class to encourage myself in the right way. Successfully, every year in college I was able to worth honor by the dean of Faculty of XXXXXXXX, in the presence of my parents for being the top student, this honor begin in a great celebration in April 2006 in my college for having very good grades for the first year at college.
Consequently, in all of the three years followed (April 2007, April 2008 and after my graduation in Feb. 2009), I was honored for getting a very good grade for the second and third years and getting an excellent grade for the last year.
I'm in a difficult situation, the deadline is next two days and I need to write two essays, the first one is "In the space provided below, list any honours or awards that you feel are relevant to this application. Include dates and a short description.
Please do not exceed 1750 characters or 25 lines in length"
the second one is "Please list below your outside interests that are not directly related to your university degree.
Please do not exceed 1750 characters or 25 lines."
I need 2 great hooks for both of them. Also, I need your great suggestions for the first essay after having a look on it, Pleeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!
To fulfillment of a big dream I had to divide my life dream into steps that can be achieved gradually. So, my several simple steps toward my goal were to get th highest possible grades in my class to encourage myself in the right way. Successfully, every year in college I was able to worth honor by the dean of Faculty of XXXXXXXX, in the presence of my parents for being the top student, this honor begin in a great celebration in April 2006 in my college for having very good grades for the first year at college.
Consequently, in all of the three years followed (April 2007, April 2008 and after my graduation in Feb. 2009), I was honored for getting a very good grade for the second and third years and getting an excellent grade for the last year.