Hi everyone! I'm applying to a prestigious residential high school called the "North Carolina School of Science and Math" (or NCSSM for short). It's highly competitive, and I want to be positive that my essays are at least sub-par. I haven't always exactly been the best writer, so hopefully I can get a little help with these. ;)
All essays have a 1500 character limit, and my first one is about awards, certificates, projects, and recognitions:
My awards and recognitions start far before high school - I've been earning awards for as long as I can remember. I really started raking in the awards when I was in elementary school - during that time I earned over 50 awards in attendance, academics, and participation in extracurricular activities.
In the 6th grade, I began studying for a competition called MathCounts - a nationwide competition for middle school students. Out of our school's "team", I was one of the few to make it to the final round in the 8th grade. I have also participated in the AMC-8 competition in the 8th grade and received the highest grade in the class.
My successes are not all academic - I also have a particular affinity with the saxophone. In the 8th grade, I was the greatest saxophone in the entire band, and received special recognition at the end of the year. During my 9th grade year, I traveled to Florida with my class for a band competition called OrlandoFest. We stayed in Florida for a few days, worked together, had fun, and walked away with a 2nd place trophy.
I think you need to emphasize whether the pond you are in currently is competitive. For instance, at some school Math Counts is by teacher recommendation only because of the size of the school and the quality of student. The kids picked are top notch. At other schools, you just sign up. If you are in the first category, state it.
Also, same thing with music. Making all district in middle or high school is considered outstanding...biggest honor in each region. If you made that, state it. Being a great saxaphone player in your school is relative to how good the other kids are. Being all district means you are the best of the best.
Show that you can shine in truly competitive ponds. Find a way to do that and you will be set!
T
