Hobbies, strenths, weaknesses - from India Personal Introduction paragraph

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This is Ravi Palakollu from India. I have completed my graduation in the stream of Bachelor of Science at Andhra University in 2008. Bio chemistry, Zoology and Chemistry were my optional subjects.I have done my Diploma in Hardware & Networking in Datapro Computer Education in 2008. I have completed my Intermediate education at Shreeram Junior College in 2004. I completed my schooling in 2000.

My family consisting of 5 members. My father is a business man, my mother is a house wife. I have two siblings.

I have worked as a Data Entry Operator in Health Management and Research Institute from 2008 to 2010. Later, I worked as Data Processing Executive In District Industries Centre, locating at our district head quarters.

My hobbies are listening music, watching television, and playing caroms.

My strengths are self motivated and being dedicated.

My weakness is taking things to heart and getting too disappointed when things are done in the wrong way.

I can present my skill and abilities as much as possible for the growth of the organisation. The above details which I furnished are true to the best of my knowledge. I am ready to face a challenging profile from your organisation upon my skills

It is fine but would be better if you make your introduction more diverse.

For example:I love to listen music and watch TV. Besides, I very like to play caroms.

Hi Goku123

Thanks for your advice!

I must follow the necessary changes.

Hi,
I would like to present a few lines regarding the stress and to relieve out of stress. Please advice me some thing regarding this paragraph and suggest me the needful.

Many people were getting busy all the day now a days. They were not in a position to take care of their belongings and even about their personal things. What I feel is, this is due to the stress and involvement of work. The dealing with everyday work is extremely due to the lack of planning and perfect schedule of work. If one could plan and schedule the work properly, it is absolutely easy to get rid of stress and strain. Even for a perfect planning, there might be some obstacles. We should not bother and worry about those things. Simply, we need to ignore the unnecessary thing right then.

We must plan the work depending upon its type. It mean, the work load, the time taken to complete the task, any support required from others, like these things. If we feel that the work takes little more time, we must start early for fast completion. We should not post pone the work to some other hours. We might be engaged with another work or task at the postponed time. Then it is difficult to complete the burdened work.

Thinking about the work will not give much result rather then to start with few steps will be great full. Firstly, we must plan with few steps. The steps must be related to the progress of work. We should not tie up with another deal while we are doing the respective task.

Planning will save the time and leads to successful completion of task.