-I,m international student and It,s hard for me to write a good essay,could you correct my mistakes in this essay.Is it possible that I get my answer just in my email.
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My motivation to do graduate work stems from a lifelong goal to pursue an academic career. For me, nothing was comparable to the pleasure of creating new ideas. I seek an intellectual life in order to create new ideas and enjoy the pleasures of innovation .The main reason that I have chosen ----- University is that I Would like to further my studies in the field of visual art. I believe that ------- art department can help me learn more techniques and methods which will improve my art work and learn new things from professional teachers.
I began painting at an early age. I went to ------ School of Fine Arts in my country and I received my high school diploma in painting. When I was there, I exhibited my paintings at different art shows. After Graduation, I went to ------- College of Art, and majored in graphic design. In my country, illustration is a part of graphic design major and I was interested more in illustration. My painting experience has led me being more successful in my illustrations to the present. My final university project was to illustrate for a cultural subject.
During my under graduate studies I gained lots of experiences in studio arts which provided me with the opportunity of working and studying at the same time.
During that time, I worked at different jobs including as an illustrator for different books and magazine and most of my books were published in local publications.
I was very fortunate to meet Mrs,------- whose team was doing illustration and graphic design in Institute for -------------. He was also a jury member in many national and international exhibitions. Working in his team played an important role in increasing of my design experience and using cultural motives with different textures in my art works.
My art works have been submitted in different Exhibitions and also I was Winner of various awards in national and international painting and illustration contests.
During last two years I had attended to the ------- University in ------ and I had gotten some studio courses.
With the experience of having illustrated and published books, and design several magazine papers and catalogs, I believe in producing valuable results by the end of my BA studies. During the following years, I plan to devote myself to MA work, which I consider to be important in gaining the ability to identify approach and solve problems.
I believe that choosing the right graduate school for my future studies is an important decision. I realize that ------ University has a long-standing commitment to the evolution of painting and illustration, and courses conducted and expertise at -------- University is in the closest match with my interests. Given my academic background and critical thinking habit, I believe in my capabilities of creating fresh ideas, making contributions to these studio art areas and learning a lot of experience at the same time.
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