MOTIVATIONAL LETTER - Sport Marketing MBA - first edit.

[Hi guys, I am applying for an MBA in Sport Management. Any suggestions are welcome! This MBA is offered in Spain and I want to make sure it flows nicely. Thanks :)

joanna

With this letter, I would like to express my strong interest in pursuing the Master's Degree in Sports Marketing, offered by XXXXX.
Having reviewed various graduate programs, I am confident that UEM will offer me the greatest opportunity to complement my university education by focusing specifically on the various aspects of sport marketing. It will provide me with the right tools, knowledge, experience and connections that I need in order to reach my long-term career goals. My drive and my passion, together with my experience working abroad and my academic achievements make me an excellent candidate for this program.

In 2011, I obtained my Bachelor of Arts degree in Business Administration from the XXXXXX. Throughout my studies I was actively engaged in planning and coordinating various special events, including Niagara on the Lake, International Women's Day, Notable TV: RW & Co. Spring Launch, and Samsung 3D Launch Party, which further confirmed my abilities to __________________. During my experience working abroad I was exposed to different cultures and structures and have taught me to , which is a great foundation for a future leader and innovator. My decision to pursue my postgraduate degree in Sport and Event Marketing immediately upon graduating developed from my strong passion for sports and marketing and my determination to towards career development. Despite my plans to attend this upcoming September, upon learning of the program offered by UEM, I am now certain that it is the perfect graduate program for me. I believe that both my educational background and previous work experience make me an excellent candidate for the program.

I have chosen xxxxxx for several reasons. First of all, the wide range of modules offered in the curriculum will allow me to specialize in the areas I am particularly interested in and will expand the sphere of my future career possibilities. Secondly, I consider it essential to obtain international work experience and my long-term goals have always involved living in Spain. This program will provide me with the right tools, knowledge, experience and connections that I need in order to attain my ambitions. In addition, Madrid is home to some of the most popular sports and therefore holds numerous professional opportunities which I am thrilled to pursue upon graduation. I became particularly excited to learn of the possibility of an internship with Real Madrid FC's marketing department. I am confident that my experience in Madrid will be extremely exciting, fun, and valuable for both my studies and overall general development. I know my capabilities, and my only wish is to be admitted into an atmosphere where I will be guaranteed to improve and gain new skills.

Enclosed please find all materials required for acceptance into this master's program. Thank you very much for your consideration of my application. I look forward to your positive response.

I hereby with to express my keen interest in pursuing a Master's Degree in Sports Marketing offered by your prestigious institution.


Having reviewed various graduate programs, I am confident that UEM would offer me the best opportunity to complement my graduate studies with a strong focus on various aspects of sports marketing.


.... I don't understand what you mean by "structures"
I had the opportunity to get exposed to different cultures and that laid a great foundation for my innovative and leadership skills.