Hello, this is in one of my applications. I am trying to shape an appropriate and meaningful response.
here's what they said:
_____'s new president, _______ _______, is creating a culture at ______ that is open, creative, and participatory in new and different ways for the entire community of students, faculty, staff and alumni. Start thinking about how you might help shape that community and the future of ______ with your one-sentence starter thought:
here is what I have so far:
As a student at ______ I plan to share the story of my experiences, interests, and creativity, absorb the stories that others have to tell, and use my own interpretations to foster a better community through design.
Am I being to abstract? Do you think they literally mean one sentence? Is this a proper sentence? Please advise! Thanks.
here's what they said:
_____'s new president, _______ _______, is creating a culture at ______ that is open, creative, and participatory in new and different ways for the entire community of students, faculty, staff and alumni. Start thinking about how you might help shape that community and the future of ______ with your one-sentence starter thought:
here is what I have so far:
As a student at ______ I plan to share the story of my experiences, interests, and creativity, absorb the stories that others have to tell, and use my own interpretations to foster a better community through design.
Am I being to abstract? Do you think they literally mean one sentence? Is this a proper sentence? Please advise! Thanks.