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Pharmaceutical Master - Review for Scholarship Essays



yusufzaimh 1 / 1  
Jan 4, 2018   #1

my interest in medicinal chemistry



Drug discovery has always been known as a long and complex process. It might took more than 15 years from identifying the target molecule, discovering the potential drug candidate, until the drug comes to the end-user. Recently, with a rapid progress in computational method, such challenging process could be done in just a few years. However, the excess of information gained from such bioinformatics, molecular docking, and combinatorial chemistry, might in turn causes the global shortage of medicinal chemist. In fact, the expertise with real experiences and skills in liquid handling are still needed as the key person in drug design research. Conducting serial of laboratory tasks including chemical reactions, in-vitro in-vivo experiment, and clicinal trials are just a few of the required research skills nowadays. These challenges had encouraged me to apply the research Master Program of Medical and Pharmaceutical Drug Innovation at University of Groningen.

Ever studied in bachelor program at Department of Chemistry in Universitas Indonesia, I learnt that designing certain organic compounds could be as essential as breathing fresh air. Knowing that synthesis of compounds with interesting properties might save lives millions of people, I developed my interest in related organic chemistry courses. I got A score for Organic Chemistry II and A- for Physical Organic Chemistry classes. My final research projects also worked on the synthesis and of pyrazole-derived compound as a ligand for lanthanide complexes. Later I recognized that four years is not enough to fulfill my passion in field of synthetic chemistry, in which I decided to further deepen my knowledge about this topic in medicinal and pharmaceutical context.

When I found this research master program, it feels this program has a great suitability with my later interest in medicinal chemistry. The program equipped with solid curricula in medicinal chemistry and bioanalysis, along with strong research group in drug design, pharmaceutical analyisis, and analytical biochemistry. Two research group that I am mostly fascinated are Prof Alexander Domling's Drug Design group, that develops the Multi-Component Reaction (MCR) chemistry, which can bring the old-fashioned synthetic organic into the new era and offer vast potential for pharmaceutical industries, and Prof Angela Cassini's Medicinal Inorganic Chemistry, that studies the role of metallocomplexes in biological systems. This research-focused program will also give a huge benefit to significantly enhance my research skill, as well as a preliminary preparation before continuing into PhD. The opportunity to take the final research project in abroad is also attract me as it will broaden my network to getting know the many of the top researcher in the world. Furthermore, I strongly believe that University of Groningen will provide with an excellent network of people from different cultures and backgrounds and offer me lifetime opportunities to broaden my horizon.

Next after this program, I am eager to further advancing my research in PhD degree, before turning back into my native country as medicinal chemist researcher in academia. Working in academia give the advantage to open the chance for collaborating with another top foreign researcher, produce more scientific contribution, and transfer the knowledge to the younger generation. With a huge number of population, innovation in drug development as well as medical science will be crucial to leverage the quality of live of million peoples in Indonesia.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15371  
Jan 4, 2018   #2
Yusuf, were you given a prompt to respond to for the formulation of your response? I wish you had uploaded it to this site along with the essay that you wrote. I am worried that your essay has veered too much off course with regards to its development as a scholarship essay. What you wrote does not indicate how the scholarship can help you or why you believe that this scholarship, if granted to you, will allow you to pursue the best masters degree possible. This sounds more like a motivational letter for a masters admission application than a scholarship essay at the moment.

The essay is also plagued by numerous grammatical and sentence structure errors that should be addressed either in the revision or replaced when you write a different essay in response to the given prompt. You may use either Word 2016 or an online spelling and grammar checker to help you fix the grammatical and written issues of your essay. Unfortunately, I cannot correct all of the errors in your writing because that would be a violation of the forum rules. Specially when I am not sure if you have written a proper response to the prompt for this scholarship or not.
OP yusufzaimh 1 / 1  
Jan 4, 2018   #3
@Holt thank you very much for precious respond. Sorry I still didnt understand what do you mean by "prompt" ? I guess I wrote the wrong title for this essay. This essay is meant to be a motivation letter just as you said. It is completely for the master admission of application. Would you mind to give one more review in regards this essay as motivation letter? I got your point for the numerous grammatical error, thus I am going to revise it as soon as possible. Your feedback was very helpful. thank you very much


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