As English is not my first language, would you please help me to correct my drafted reference letter below.
I am writing this on behalf of my undergraduate professor who would be my academic reference person for admission in Msc Enterpreneurship at UK.
It would be greatly appreciated if you guys kindly give me some feedback on this writing.
Thank you in advance for your kind support :))))
=====================================
To Whom It May Concern,
It is a great pleasure to write this reference letter in strong support of Ms. XXXX as a candidate for admission to your master's program.
As a lecturer in Faculty of XXX [Business Program] at XXX University, I instructed Ms. XXXX in two classes and also served as a project advisor in her senior year. While she was studying my courses, I considered Ms. XXXX as an outstanding student who demonstrated deep understanding of the subject matter and consistently showed an excellent mark for her assignments. Also, she possessed immense diligence and enthusiasm for her study, that has resulted in her being one of the students who always obtained very high scores in my classes. Without doubt, in 2000 she graduated bachelor's degree with First Class Honours.
In addition, Ms. XXXX as a fast learner, and a team player is articulate, expressed herself very well in her senior project in Management Information System program, she was required to develop useful information system solutions to meet real business needs. She performed well in her communication to work as a team and has her great social skills that could cooperate very well with her colleagues. During the process of developing this project, she put great emphasis on exploring the possible solutions under my direction. With this approach, the quality of her senior project was compelling, and she also managed to find appropriately solutions to very challenging problems.
Aside from her well-done academic performance, she had actively participated in many extracurricular activities, especially the volunteer works which helped her develop leadership and time management skills. I believe that these particular skills from her experiences will be beneficial to her further studies.
Moreover, immediately after earning her bachelor's degree, Ms. XXXX was invited to join XXXX as an IT auditor, where she focused on executing the corporate risks based on technology infrastructure and business process, involving several clients in the financial sector. The professional work experience in the prestigious firm has given her a great opportunity to apply the educational learnt at university into practice. And with her good work performance, she has been rather assigned as the IT auditor-in-charge for a number of insurance engagements in a short period.
It is Ms. XXXX intention to further her studies at your university where she trusts she would be able to develop her capabilities. I fully support and agree with her idea to further explore and broaden her spectrum of management knowledge in the United Kingdom where she can study her chosen area of specialty before resuming her career in XXX.
With her excellent academic background and work experience from a well-known international firm, I am confident that she has the potential to be a student in your program. Her combination of intelligence, endurance, innovative and dedication characters will surely make her a valuable student of your program. Your kind and favorable consideration to her application would be most appreciated. If you have any further questions regarding to her background or qualifications, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Best Regards,
I am writing this on behalf of my undergraduate professor who would be my academic reference person for admission in Msc Enterpreneurship at UK.
It would be greatly appreciated if you guys kindly give me some feedback on this writing.
Thank you in advance for your kind support :))))
=====================================
To Whom It May Concern,
It is a great pleasure to write this reference letter in strong support of Ms. XXXX as a candidate for admission to your master's program.
As a lecturer in Faculty of XXX [Business Program] at XXX University, I instructed Ms. XXXX in two classes and also served as a project advisor in her senior year. While she was studying my courses, I considered Ms. XXXX as an outstanding student who demonstrated deep understanding of the subject matter and consistently showed an excellent mark for her assignments. Also, she possessed immense diligence and enthusiasm for her study, that has resulted in her being one of the students who always obtained very high scores in my classes. Without doubt, in 2000 she graduated bachelor's degree with First Class Honours.
In addition, Ms. XXXX as a fast learner, and a team player is articulate, expressed herself very well in her senior project in Management Information System program, she was required to develop useful information system solutions to meet real business needs. She performed well in her communication to work as a team and has her great social skills that could cooperate very well with her colleagues. During the process of developing this project, she put great emphasis on exploring the possible solutions under my direction. With this approach, the quality of her senior project was compelling, and she also managed to find appropriately solutions to very challenging problems.
Aside from her well-done academic performance, she had actively participated in many extracurricular activities, especially the volunteer works which helped her develop leadership and time management skills. I believe that these particular skills from her experiences will be beneficial to her further studies.
Moreover, immediately after earning her bachelor's degree, Ms. XXXX was invited to join XXXX as an IT auditor, where she focused on executing the corporate risks based on technology infrastructure and business process, involving several clients in the financial sector. The professional work experience in the prestigious firm has given her a great opportunity to apply the educational learnt at university into practice. And with her good work performance, she has been rather assigned as the IT auditor-in-charge for a number of insurance engagements in a short period.
It is Ms. XXXX intention to further her studies at your university where she trusts she would be able to develop her capabilities. I fully support and agree with her idea to further explore and broaden her spectrum of management knowledge in the United Kingdom where she can study her chosen area of specialty before resuming her career in XXX.
With her excellent academic background and work experience from a well-known international firm, I am confident that she has the potential to be a student in your program. Her combination of intelligence, endurance, innovative and dedication characters will surely make her a valuable student of your program. Your kind and favorable consideration to her application would be most appreciated. If you have any further questions regarding to her background or qualifications, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Best Regards,
