Where do you see yourself, professionally, one year after graduating? (200 words)

After completing my MBA, I will be well equipped to handle the variety of issues involved in employing information technology successfully within organizations. Following graduation, the next steps will be to obtain a position as an IT Consultant in the Hi-Tech or Healthcare Industry. As an IT Consultant I will utilize the leadership, communication, and technical skills that I developed at McComb to help people leverage technology to do their jobs more efficiently and effectively. I will use my technical skills to identify and improve business-operating processes. I will use my analytical and problem solving skills to analyze and propose new business processes that will enhance the efficient of a company and reduce their operating cost. My experiences as a cohort student and foundation of being a team player will allow me to work collaboratively with clients to help them achieve the established goals for the company. My leadership and communication skills will help me to effectively lead, communicate, and manage the successful implementation of the improved business-operating processes.

... I feel you better start with the second line;
Following graduation, I am confident of having myself elevated to the position of IT Consultant in the Hi-Tech or Healthcare Industry. The knowledge and exposure I gather from this MBA would certainly assist me in discharging my new responsibilities, by allowing me to effectively handle various issues that are involved with employing information technology successfully within organizations.