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I am concerned about the write up below- does it answer the question.? facts mentioned are worth knowing for adcom?
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"You don't want to be a sheep in a herd", my mother said. With my big brown eyes I stared at her, waiting for an explanation. "Dear, you have the capability to be different- to stand out", she explained. Since that moment, I strive to make a difference in whatever I do. This is exemplified by my consistent academic excellence, professional achievements, continued passion for sports and involvement with community services.
During my tenure at xxx Germany, I strove to bring about a change in the nature of work outsourced to my team at the Indian subsidiary. After developing a thorough understanding of project life-cycle, I worked towards attaining higher levels of quality adherence for xxx projects. Through my continuous efforts, these projects reported a 96% reduction in the number of quality issues within two months. This exceptional improvement increased the customer's trust in my abilities to handle intricate tasks. I, therefore, played an instrumental part in setting up base for new BMW projects and in brining further business to India. Such demonstrated professional brilliance not only won me accolades but also reflected in my two subsequent promotions. Moreover, with my calm, confident manner of functioning and my receptiveness towards learning foreign languages, I not only turned a complex global workplace into a welcoming learning platform but also developed warm relationships to nurture for a lifetime.
At the age of six I had my first table tennis lesson. The passion for sports started growing, leading me to learn swimming, rock-climbing, rifle-shooting, and basketball. My continued interest in basketball won me a state championship trophy and many college tournaments. My involvement with sports taught me to be a team player, and many times, to step up to lead towards victory.
My ability to look beyond myself triggered me to volunteer for various social and environmental campaigns since the age of fourteen. This also led me to be elected as the vice-president of the environment club under which I organized anti-polythene and anti-cracker campaigns. Sustaining this inclination, I am currently involved in the organization of "Football for all" Festival.
These diverse experiences highlight my innovative thinking, ability to multitask, perseverance and sustained passions in life. My diverse experiential learning, and demonstrated commitment towards work and community, make me a suitable candidate for xxx.
I am concerned about the write up below- does it answer the question.? facts mentioned are worth knowing for adcom?
Any information that you deem relevant to your application?
"You don't want to be a sheep in a herd", my mother said. With my big brown eyes I stared at her, waiting for an explanation. "Dear, you have the capability to be different- to stand out", she explained. Since that moment, I strive to make a difference in whatever I do. This is exemplified by my consistent academic excellence, professional achievements, continued passion for sports and involvement with community services.
During my tenure at xxx Germany, I strove to bring about a change in the nature of work outsourced to my team at the Indian subsidiary. After developing a thorough understanding of project life-cycle, I worked towards attaining higher levels of quality adherence for xxx projects. Through my continuous efforts, these projects reported a 96% reduction in the number of quality issues within two months. This exceptional improvement increased the customer's trust in my abilities to handle intricate tasks. I, therefore, played an instrumental part in setting up base for new BMW projects and in brining further business to India. Such demonstrated professional brilliance not only won me accolades but also reflected in my two subsequent promotions. Moreover, with my calm, confident manner of functioning and my receptiveness towards learning foreign languages, I not only turned a complex global workplace into a welcoming learning platform but also developed warm relationships to nurture for a lifetime.
At the age of six I had my first table tennis lesson. The passion for sports started growing, leading me to learn swimming, rock-climbing, rifle-shooting, and basketball. My continued interest in basketball won me a state championship trophy and many college tournaments. My involvement with sports taught me to be a team player, and many times, to step up to lead towards victory.
My ability to look beyond myself triggered me to volunteer for various social and environmental campaigns since the age of fourteen. This also led me to be elected as the vice-president of the environment club under which I organized anti-polythene and anti-cracker campaigns. Sustaining this inclination, I am currently involved in the organization of "Football for all" Festival.
These diverse experiences highlight my innovative thinking, ability to multitask, perseverance and sustained passions in life. My diverse experiential learning, and demonstrated commitment towards work and community, make me a suitable candidate for xxx.