'we use it everyday and for everything' - Is our society too dependent on technology?

Nowadays technology plays a huge part in our life.Our society is far too dependent on technology,because we use it everyday and for everything.Everyone has a different kinds of attitudes with this issue.Today, the world is referred to as being in the "age of technology." Anyway is our society too dipendent on technology?

Firstly,everyone uses all sorts of techniques in daily life.Technology has opened up many opportunities for us.It speeds up our work, makes us more efficient, and keeps us organized.

Secondly,technology,especially the internet makes all information easily accessible for society.What would your day look like if you couldn't chronicle every step on Facebook or Twitter? I always try to arrange a few minutes to see news feeds and check my social networks. Many people behave just like me. I use technology for everything.For example, on holiday,i and my uncle went to south georgia,in uplistsikhe.we didn't know road and used GPS navigation.It helped us to find easily.

As with everything,technologies have disadvantages.We are using our brains less and less.We have stopped communicating with each other.Using headphones and ear buds can cause people to lose their hearing over time.

In conclusion,our society is far too dependent on technology.Constant advancement in technology have improved our lives in innumerable ways.

I think this is an accident. It is supposed to say 'technology', I think?

I like the structure, with 'firstly' and 'secondly', etc. That makes it clear. And I like the eloquent sentence here: 'As with everything..'

Today, the people say we are in the 'digital age' because of our dependence on technology.

Now, let's not put this sentence at the end of the first paragraph: Anyway is our society too dipendent on technology ? the sentence at the end of the first paragraph becomes the main idea of the paper.

What is the real main idea? Here is the way to find out:

The main idea of the paper = (Firstly,everyone uses all sorts of techniques in daily life.) + (Secondly,technology,especially the internet makes all information easily accessible for society.)

Those 2 sentences comprise your main argument/idea. They share your main message to the reader. So I think you should type one sentence based on those two ideas, and add that sentence to the end of the first paragraph.

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