Compose Topic Sentences

[i]Compose topic sentences that will begin paragraphs.

1. To explain to the police a traffic accident you witnessed.
After Witnessing a traffic accident I was thankful for all the good things I have in my life.

2. To explain what beauty means to you.
A woman's biggest asset is her beauty either if it's her hair, her eyes or any part of her body.

3. To explain why you are attending college or university.
Attending college is the biggest accomplishment I am doing in my life.

4.To tell a friend about your experience of seeing an accident happen.
Seeing an accident happen was a very emotional experience.

5. To describe your dream house.
Jaquiz on the balcony, one of the must have features in my dream house .

"A woman's biggest asset is her beauty, be iteither if it's her hair, her eyes, or any other part of her body."

"Attending college is my biggest accomplishment I am doing in my life "

"Seeing an accident happen was a very emotional experience." Be more specific.

"Jaquiz on the balcony, one of the must have features in my dream house ." This is a sentence fragment. Revise.

"After witnessing a traffic accident, I became thankful for all the good things I have in my life."

On #4, Is that really how you would describe what you witnessed if you were talking to a friend?
It might actually be more like, "Wow! You won't believe what just happened!!!"

:)

Maybe "...is one of the must-have features" will do?