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Check sentences about media topic - newspapers


Nguyen123 1 / -  
Mar 11, 2018   #1

sensational journalism



Today, I would like to focus on media topic. I was just reading a breaking news before I ate my breakfast. I usually up to the minutes for newspaper which many stale news.

I though that many editorial police have not seen good views. Therefore, they have been falling circulation which they sold each day. Maybe, they need a celebrity endorsement for their journal, news and advertising. I realized that they focused on sensational journalism too much which did not help building brand on top.

P/s: Thank you for your help.
TJLuschen - / 241 203  
Mar 14, 2018   #2
Today, I would like to focus on [the topic of the media].

a breaking news [article] before I ate

I usually [stay] up to the [minute] for newspaper ... {this sentence is very confusing - maybe "I usually stay up the the minute by reading the newspaper and avoiding stale news."

I [thought] that many editorial police have not ... {this is confusing also - what are "editorial police"?

Therefore, they have been [experiencing] falling circulation [, reflected in a diminishing number of papers] sold each day.

... which did not help [in] building [their] brand [to the] top.


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