This is summary a video by Achenyo Idachaba which has ...
This summary is extracted from the video of Achenyo Idachaba published in TEDtalk.com with how I turned a deadly plant into a thriving business in the tittle.
Idhachaba was to expound
It was Idhachaba who expounded
Others living problems have been dealt such as economic ...
This sentence is too bulky with the ideas coming nowhere. I suggest breaking it into two-three sentences. Bear in mind that clarity is the king.
she found out to
she examined... One word is always better than two-three words.
alternative solution for it which can turn economic growth
I omit the preposition FOR and conjunction WHICH as to solve the grammatical problem