Writing Feedback / From my point of view, the most crucial trait of a person is his diligence [3]

In your opinion . What is the most important characteristic (for example . Honesty . Intelligence . A sense of humor ) that a person can have to be successful in life ? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer . When you write your answer . You are not limited to the examples listed in the prompt

There are many characteristics that person needs to have to be successful . But I want to speak about the most important characteristic from my point of view . It is hardworking . The reasons of my opinion are discussed in the following examples.

First of all . Without any efforts nobody cannot be successful . Diligence is the basic characteristic , that everyone needs to have . You can be a strong , intelligent or honest person , but having only these qualities you will not be able to make a successful life . For example . I have known many people who are very successful . As they say , the pledge of their successful life is diligence . None of them does not spend his/her time just telling some jokes or saying the truth .

Secondly . If someone is going to work somewhere , he/she has to complete the internship before he/she will start working . In this period person has a chance to show his /her ability to work well . If you do not hard work, many hirers do not need your honesty or a sense of humor . Demonstrating his/her hard work , it will bring to person success in his/her area of work .

Thirdly . Despite of your other characteristics you can be successful in both professional sphere , and in your personal life . For example , my grandmother and grandfather are very hardworking persons . They built not only their careers , but also their love. They overcome every difficulties in their life because they are hardworking .

To sum up , of course intelligence, honesty and the sense of humor are really essential features for a person. . But I strongly believe that the most important quality of being successful , it is diligence.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL standardized tests. Say me what I should change to avoid strange and obscure ideas. [4]

Agree or disagree with the following statement .
Standardizes tests like the TOEFL provide sufficient information to determine whether students should be admitted to a college or university.

Many students want to continue their education not only in their country but also in the international foreign universities and for this purpose they need to pass TOEFL, IELTS or some other examination. These are standardizes tests which help to ascertain where students can enter , universities or colleges . I agree with this statement because of the following reasons . it checks the essential four aspects of language , It is not only test of knowledge and it is real grades of your knowledge :

First of all , this kind of tests assist to examine the four aspects - reading ,listening ,speaking and writing . It means that everyone , who passes the test, has to learn well t all the aspects . In my opinion, he four sections give enough information to determine whether students should study. If a student get a high score , hence he/she knows the language well .

Secondly , There are people who are aware the foreign language very well , but during the exam they feel nervous and become confused . So in the end they receive lower score than they are expected . Tests like TOEFL not only check out the knowledge of students , but also examine the students` confidence . It is very important quality for student .

Thirdly , When students recognize their score of tests like TOEFL , they can be sure that it is a real assessment of their knowledge . Because the test is checked by professional experts , who give them the result without any encouragement . As a rule many universities have almost the same grade scale to entire . Students when are admitted to university or college , get the same score at the period of their terms, as in the test.

To sum up , I would like to highlight again that I strongly agree , these tests give sufficient information about the knowledge of student . Students who prefer to study in the foreign universities or colleges have to pass the standardizes tests to ascertain where to be admitted .In my point of view, It is very fair exam to everyone . We can verify our knowledge only due to one exam, because it includes the four significant perspectives . When we prepare to this test we not only increase our knowledge , but also strengthen our endurance.