Writing Feedback / A line chart about how many times per year the juveniles in Australia ate fast foods [2]

IELTS Writing Task 1: Consumption of Fast Food by Australian Teenagers

There is a line chart about how many times a year do the juveniles have fast food in Australia from 1975 to 2000. Pizza, fish and chips, and hamburgers are compared in the chart.

Fish and chips are consumed a hundred times in a year in 1975, and it is around tenfold increased as many pizza and hamburgers. Then the number of eaten of fish and chips declined slowly, and eventually drop off to about 85 times in 1980. However, the amount of fish and chips consumption immediately climb up and stop to the number 95 in 1985. Yet it starts to fall gradually. In the end, it is lower than the consumption of hamburgers in late 1985 and pizza in late 1990.

Instead of the fluctuated times of eaten of fish and chips, the number of times eaten of pizza and hamburgers always raise from 1975 to 1995, and they both consequently in a steady state from 1995 to 2000.

Writing Feedback / Who was more eager to get an advanced education? Men, women and after full or part-time education? [2]

The bar chart illustrates the numbers of people who got an advanced education between men and women with comparing full-time education and part-time education from 1970 to 1991.

It was clearly different between the numbers of full-time education and part-time education. There is an incredible difference that people got much more further part-time learning than full-time learning. On the other hand, the chart tells us the numbers of men in part-time education decrease compared to 1970 to 1991; whereas the numbers of women increased year by year. However, there was a same situation between males and females in full-time education- the number of education rose apparently in the period, especially in females.

According to the bar chart, we are informed men who had further part-time studying were more than women in 1970/71, 1000 thousands and about 750 thousands individually. Nevertheless, the situation reversed in 1990/91. The biggest difference is in the part-time schooling, that approximately 900 thousands of males had, compared with 1100 thousands of females did.

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