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Posts by vicky17
Name: vicky nurhakim
Joined: Dec 5, 2016
Last Post: Dec 5, 2016
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vicky17   
Dec 5, 2016
Writing Feedback / Snowman Revenge - it was built on a hydrant. [5]

Hello ikhlas!
i have got some mistake in your summary

So Mary and her family get(GET) in to house for dinner together. Suddanlythey hear truck's sound in outside.
1.this is the past form,you should use "They heard truck's.." it is more appropriate than before.

"suddenly" not suddanly..
vicky17   
Dec 5, 2016
Writing Feedback / (summary)Strong Personalities Skew Study Samples [4]

In truth, All of owner pets prefer to explain their dogs's character.It is has became a custom there.But the issue of animals' capability is not one that has been formally studied all that much.Based on research that a species of bird into groups of more and not aggressive male,However they found that each type of individual quiet different of behavior in each of these situations.somehow they also found that the birds more likely to take risk also were the ones largely to be trapped.So,They raising important questions about the skewed sample set presented when researchers base their findings on animals caught in traps.
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