thisissabrinaxx
May 3, 2017
Letters / Negative experience due to the bad service and food. Writing a complaint letter to restaurant owner [2]
Hi @adambacon813
I have read your letter and I would like to give some suggestions on the tone of your writing.
1. Instead of writing "You are receiving this complaint letter from a customer who was in your restaurant last week on Feb 15th." I recommend writing like this " I am writing to complain about..."
2. "as my girlfriend and I were ready to start to enjoy our fancy dinner" should better write in this way, "as my girlfriend and I were ready to start enjoying our fancy dinner"
3. Instead of wiring a swift response, you can write in this way, "I look forward to your reply in due course.""
Hi @adambacon813
I have read your letter and I would like to give some suggestions on the tone of your writing.
1. Instead of writing "You are receiving this complaint letter from a customer who was in your restaurant last week on Feb 15th." I recommend writing like this " I am writing to complain about..."
2. "as my girlfriend and I were ready to start to enjoy our fancy dinner" should better write in this way, "as my girlfriend and I were ready to start enjoying our fancy dinner"
3. Instead of wiring a swift response, you can write in this way, "I look forward to your reply in due course.""